Toxic-Shredder's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Støv - «Rives»]

That was... well, maybe you should put this under the genre of horror.

The resolution of the 3D models were great, the music was well-composed, and it's definitely interested.

But it also scares the fuck out of me.

[Low Poly Rocks]

A typical speedpaint, but with better music. I liked the idea, and I really can't think of any way to improve the experience since there really isn't anything that meant to be taken away from this. So, it warrants 3 stars.

Zakenmaru responds:

Thanks :)

[Trim]

Simply wonderful. But the audio is a bit grating, so only 3 and half stars for you.

[Pot Sniffers]

This has a lot lot of potential. Improve the audio quality, and make the artwork a little better (having the white guy's face literally flip is just bad animation). Do these and this could be really good.

[Tony's dream]

Fuck the what? What the hell was that? There wasn't really any setting or plot. The whole thing went so fast that there really wasn't any reasonable way to grasp much of what was going on, and it was altogether just too short and confusing. Make it longer, flesh out the plot more, even if it's just adding some decent narration to replace the dialogue in the beginning, and just add more to it. Also, get rid of the end part where you're begging people to subscribe. This really wasn't a show of any talent, and even if it was, this is Newgrounds, not YouTube.

[A fight in an empty place]

I would say this is a good start for a new animator, but not upload-worthy. The music doesn't fit the theme, and artwork seems a bit rushed, and anything where a Kirby is sliced in half should make baby pandas cry. The animation itself was quite fluid. I would say work on making the artwork a bit more symmetrical, and changing the music to something a bit more "epic battle-y"

Bulbasore responds:

Thank you for you perspective on my animation. kirby being sliced in half was kinda funny to me because i would not think that would happend!

[We Are Witches - Prologue]

Great work. I really like the animation style. I reminds me of a mix of Gumball and Adventure time. This looks like it as real potential. I would just take out the "subscribe now" bit. That's for YouTube.

Skatoonist responds:

Thanks so much for the feedback! especially that last bit!

I'll try update the video (If newgrounds allows) and remove the subscription notification!

thanks again! :D

[Downtown Nekketsu Fight]

I actually really like the simplicity of this. This was made with effort, the animation is fluid, and it's great for what it's meant to be. I would suggest keeping this as your signature style and just making small 8-stories. Keep up the good work.

Maxioross responds:

Thank you for your review. It did take some trial and error before i got the fuidity right, so it´s nice you noticed. And i will keep that last advice in mind.

[Identity(college work)]

This is, like you said, unfinished. The lack of sound is jarring and I'm not sure if the misspelling was on purpose or not, but it really didn't add to the expression if it was. I would suggest, adding a LOT of depth to this. Drive the point home why the kid was rejected, give him a backstory as to why he didn't conform, add some animation to the characters. Implement these few things, and you could become a great artist on here.

Akari19 responds:

i am a beginner , so don't expect miracles. sure i will try. thanks for the advice. but the time. didn't allow me to add more story to it. and my skill it about as good. as when i stated drawing.

[Toad the Chode]

Crap. It's too short, borrowed sprites makes it uninspired, and it's just generally bad. Make it longer, and add more humor to this beyond pointless violence.

Rarebanana responds:

I like your brutal honesty, guy.