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A typical speedpaint, but with better music. I liked the idea, and I really can't think of any way to improve the experience since there really isn't anything that meant to be taken away from this. So, it warrants 3 stars.

Zakenmaru responds:

Thanks :)

I would say this is a good start for a new animator, but not upload-worthy. The music doesn't fit the theme, and artwork seems a bit rushed, and anything where a Kirby is sliced in half should make baby pandas cry. The animation itself was quite fluid. I would say work on making the artwork a bit more symmetrical, and changing the music to something a bit more "epic battle-y"

Bulbasore responds:

Thank you for you perspective on my animation. kirby being sliced in half was kinda funny to me because i would not think that would happend!

Great work. I really like the animation style. I reminds me of a mix of Gumball and Adventure time. This looks like it as real potential. I would just take out the "subscribe now" bit. That's for YouTube.

Skatoonist responds:

Thanks so much for the feedback! especially that last bit!

I'll try update the video (If newgrounds allows) and remove the subscription notification!

thanks again! :D

I actually really like the simplicity of this. This was made with effort, the animation is fluid, and it's great for what it's meant to be. I would suggest keeping this as your signature style and just making small 8-stories. Keep up the good work.

Maxioross responds:

Thank you for your review. It did take some trial and error before i got the fuidity right, so it´s nice you noticed. And i will keep that last advice in mind.

This is, like you said, unfinished. The lack of sound is jarring and I'm not sure if the misspelling was on purpose or not, but it really didn't add to the expression if it was. I would suggest, adding a LOT of depth to this. Drive the point home why the kid was rejected, give him a backstory as to why he didn't conform, add some animation to the characters. Implement these few things, and you could become a great artist on here.

Akari19 responds:

i am a beginner , so don't expect miracles. sure i will try. thanks for the advice. but the time. didn't allow me to add more story to it. and my skill it about as good. as when i stated drawing.

Crap. It's too short, borrowed sprites makes it uninspired, and it's just generally bad. Make it longer, and add more humor to this beyond pointless violence.

Rarebanana responds:

I like your brutal honesty, guy.

I honestly think you should keep your trailers for DeviantArt on DeviantArt. If you're desperate, put up a news post.

TMNTSam responds:

Okay, bud. I'll do just that. Because to be honest, I AM DESPERATE.

This was hilarious! I enjoyed this a lot. Usually, I could find something to critique or enhance, but I really can't thunk of anything. I suppose if maybe you extended the movie to include or reviewer stereotypes, it could increase the hilarity of the video, but that's all I got.

IceBurger responds:

Glad you found it so funny, thanks for the review!
:D

I enjoyed this a lot. The artwork had a creepy, but enchanting feel to it, the Satanic imagery was very fitting with the song's symphonic tone, and the generally dark energy is a fresh feeling. My only complaint is the animation. I can it being fitting if you were going for a puppet-like feel, but the animation, in my opinion, should have been more fluid. It would have emphasized the action. Overall, a very nice movie indeed.

Paperguest responds:

Thank you. You shed a little sunlight on my gloomy day.

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