That was... well, maybe you should put this under the genre of horror.
The resolution of the 3D models were great, the music was well-composed, and it's definitely interested.
But it also scares the fuck out of me.
That was... well, maybe you should put this under the genre of horror.
The resolution of the 3D models were great, the music was well-composed, and it's definitely interested.
But it also scares the fuck out of me.
A typical speedpaint, but with better music. I liked the idea, and I really can't think of any way to improve the experience since there really isn't anything that meant to be taken away from this. So, it warrants 3 stars.
Thanks :)
Simply wonderful. But the audio is a bit grating, so only 3 and half stars for you.
I would say this is a good start for a new animator, but not upload-worthy. The music doesn't fit the theme, and artwork seems a bit rushed, and anything where a Kirby is sliced in half should make baby pandas cry. The animation itself was quite fluid. I would say work on making the artwork a bit more symmetrical, and changing the music to something a bit more "epic battle-y"
Thank you for you perspective on my animation. kirby being sliced in half was kinda funny to me because i would not think that would happend!
Great work. I really like the animation style. I reminds me of a mix of Gumball and Adventure time. This looks like it as real potential. I would just take out the "subscribe now" bit. That's for YouTube.
Thanks so much for the feedback! especially that last bit!
I'll try update the video (If newgrounds allows) and remove the subscription notification!
thanks again! :D
I actually really like the simplicity of this. This was made with effort, the animation is fluid, and it's great for what it's meant to be. I would suggest keeping this as your signature style and just making small 8-stories. Keep up the good work.
Thank you for your review. It did take some trial and error before i got the fuidity right, so it´s nice you noticed. And i will keep that last advice in mind.
This is, like you said, unfinished. The lack of sound is jarring and I'm not sure if the misspelling was on purpose or not, but it really didn't add to the expression if it was. I would suggest, adding a LOT of depth to this. Drive the point home why the kid was rejected, give him a backstory as to why he didn't conform, add some animation to the characters. Implement these few things, and you could become a great artist on here.
i am a beginner , so don't expect miracles. sure i will try. thanks for the advice. but the time. didn't allow me to add more story to it. and my skill it about as good. as when i stated drawing.
Crap. It's too short, borrowed sprites makes it uninspired, and it's just generally bad. Make it longer, and add more humor to this beyond pointless violence.
I like your brutal honesty, guy.
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